GeneralBaker's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Mercury VIP]

Decent song! You are really good at mixing the piano in with the EDM. I gave 3.5 stars just because it is a little repetitive, but I still like it.

[Partystorm]

Pretty good, but not a huge fan of the pitch shift at 3:16.

[Pixel Rave]

Glad you got front paged! Hope this gets you a few more followers!

[Collision]

First, you wrote a dubstep at 145 BPM. I am somewhat impressed because a qualification for dubstep is a BPM between 120 and 130. However, this still sounded fine.

Second, you said:
"While I was making this song I still had no name for it, until at the end it occurred to me out of nowhere Collision, the same situation that happened to me while producing Cosmic Journey"
This is pretty much how I come up with all of my song names. If you are ever stuck, though, I suggest posting it and asking people what it should be named. Alternitavly you could brainstorm an album theme (creomusic tends to use names that have something to do with a circle) and then go from there.

Third, here is a second-by-second review of the song:

Intro [0:00 to 0:44]: I liked it. Rythym is very good, I like the cymbal especially. I also enjoyed the melody

[0:44 to 0:54]: good transition. Maybe needs a little more / stronger bass, but still good

[0:54 to 1:48]: really long, also growler sounds a little weird. Maybe change up some of this by adding more instruments or a slightly different melody here, or just cutting it down by half.

[1:48 to 2:02] good transition for what came next. Cooled off the growler really well.

[2:02 to 2:54] cut this in half or use this to somewhat build up to the next section.

[2:54 to 3:46] same as 0:44 to 1:48.

[3:46 to 4:15] still strange growler, but this is a much better length.

[4:15 to 4:53] ok ending.

Overall:
This is really good for two days and not knowing how to make Dubstep super well. I really like the lead-up, but the growler you used could use some work. It is a tad fast, so if you want to add length to your song without repeating anything, maybe lower the BPM down to at least 130 (but I suggest 120).

Nice job!

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EDIT: You were right, dubstep is from 132–142 BPM. Just goes to show how much I know about dubstep XD

SuperSoniker responds:

By detailed feedbacks like this one, it helps me a lot to improve my music producing skills, and not only that, also to better name my songs.

Regarding the BPM, I always believed that Dubstep's default BPM was between 140 and 145, but you've left me in doubt, maybe I'll check it out again.

And well, thank you very much for the comment to take into account certain aspects to improve.

[Chrythm - MELTDOWN]

Your prologue was fairly good, not much else to say there.

0:48 to 1:30 - Very good, I like the base that you used.

1:30 to 2:00 was pretty good, but I feel like 4 repetitions is a bit much. Maybe try to harmonize a little after the 8th bar (about 1:45), or add new instruments. Just something to make sure it doesn't get old. Also a bit bouncy.

2:00 to 2:48: again, this part goes on a tad too long.

2:48 to 3:26: fairly good (for the same reason as 0:48 to 1:30), but too long

3:27 to 3:30: This didn't really match the song, and somewhat caught me off guard, though that might just be me as I generally don't like lyrics in my EDM.

3:30 to 4:10: same as 1:30 to 2:00

4:10 to 4:19: Poor ending to a decent song, in my opinion.

Overall:
Not a huge fan of this one, mostly from the lyrics that didn't really add anything to the song. This is also really repetitive. In my opinion, keep the song short and sweet. If they like it, they will come back and listen again. Don't try and extend parts, or they become old really quickly.

However, I really liked the bouncy-ish bass that you added about at 0:46. You can do crazy stuff with that, so keep going!

[(Liquid DnB) Kairyu - Jupiter]

Drums are pretty good, but the song itself is pretty repetitive. Sounds somewhat dissonant throughout, it sounds like you tried to make spooky music. Keep going!

[Another World]

I feel like I have heard 1:00 and 3:20 in some other of your songs, forgot which tho. Other than that pretty good!

Edit: 1:00 sounds like Level X3

[Sugarsnap]

Sounds like Mr. Rogers + Electric mix. I like it!